Saturday, March 2, 2013

NEW POETRY BOOK



Lewis, J. Patrick. National Geographic Book of Animal Poetry: 200 Poems That Squeak, Soar, and Roar! Washington, D.C.: National Geographic, 2012.  ISBN 978-1-4263-1009-6

Poetic Elements:  Rhyme abounds throughout this book. Onomatopoeia is highlighted in the poem "Luna Moth" that reads, “Tick-tick-ticking-all silver-green.”  The anonymous poem "Bull and Ox" models the use of simile, “A bull acts like a bully.” Personification is prototyped in Marilyn Singer’s poem "Beavers in November" where the beaver speaks in first person, “You pat, I gnaw, I pile, You store.”  "The Walrus" by Jack Prelutsky combines alliteration and assonance: “The widdly, waddly walrus has flippery, floppery feet” and “The thundery, blunder walrus has rubbery, blubbery hide.”  Janet Wong uses imagery in her poem "Blue Jay" when the interpretation of an alert sound the Blue Jay makes is code for “Hawk incoming! Fight!” These are only a few examples of the many, many poetic elements that can be found in this anthology about animals.

Appeal:  Providing an assortment of poets and poetry styles will beg those short in attention to stay tuned.  The quantity of poems and photographs that are included are a distraction (in a good way) to keep the reader responsive. Observing how God has uniquely designed and equipped each animal to live will leave readers in awe of HIS awesomeness.  New insights about these creatures will be learned by all who interact with this book and will peak curiosities to want to learn more. 

Overall Quality:  The design and organization of this book have been well conceived.  The book is oversized for visual purposes.  The poems are appropriately written for both young and old people alike to enjoy.  To fully appreciate the book, one must look at the photographs, too.  Most are from photographers that were at the right place, at the right time to be able to capture such unusual shots.  A variety of poetry styles are used and mixed throughout.  Depending on the photograph, depends on the number of poems that are featured on the page as well as its location.  All of the poems are written in the same size font.  Poem spacing depends upon the type of poem that has been written.  The poem "The Anteater" written by Douglas Florian is included in this anthology and it takes up more room than usual because it is a shape poem.  On the contrary, J.W. Hackett shares a haiku poem about sparrows which is a concise 3-line poem. This book does not necessarily make me want to read more poems by J. Patrick Lewis who put the compilation together, but after reading various poems within the book, I would consider seeking out other featured poets that are published within the book.   

The Poets:  The US Children’s Poet Laureate, J. Patrick Lewis, has compiled this book to feature many outstanding poets.  Some of the notable poets include:  Robert Frost, Jack Prelutsky, Emily Dickinson, Janet Wong, and Jane Yolen.  Those poets less known include:  Edward Lear, Kay Ryan, Charles Simic, and Norma Farber.  Some of the poems in this book are included in other books.  For example, "Mother’s Plea" by Lee Bennett Hopkins is also featured in his book City I Love which was written solely by Hopkins.  This book is an anthology that teaches from various sources about animals.

Layout:  The book is very nicely organized.  It is 183 pages in length and has 200 poems about animals and includes many photographs.  It is not intended to be read all at once cover to cover, but to pick and choose randomly in no specific order.  An introduction is written by J. Patrick Lewis who hand selected the poems for this book, which is followed by the Table of Contents.  The animal poems in the Table of Contents have been grouped together in various related animal characteristics:  The Big Ones, The Little Ones, The Winged Ones, and The Water Ones, etc. After all of the poems have been shared, there is a section called “Writing Poems About Animals.”  It segments about various styles of poetry writing and then gives an example for each of the following types:  couplet, shape poem, haiku, limerick, free verse, and cinquain.  A “Resources” page follows allocating a selected bibliography of children’s books on wordplay.  Some of those include:  acrostics, anagrams, epitaphs, lipograms, parodies, rebuses, and reversos.  Thus it is probably quite obvious that there is a variety of poetry styles used throughout the book, but all pertain to animals in some way.  The Index is organized four different ways:  Title, Poet, First Line, and Subject.  Text credits and photo credits help to conclude the book.  Background information is not included about the poets or their poems.  However, the more notable poets have several poems published in this book compared to those less known only having single poems featured. 

Spotlight Poem:  The poem "Zebra" (shared below) would be a great anticipatory set to use with teaching critical thinking skills on multiple perspectives.  I would follow by reading several of Doreen Cronin’s books Diary of a Spider, Diary of a Worm, and Diary of a Fly.  By discussing the point of view that each book is written from, students would learn to analyze and think more critically. Students could then pick their own animal and apply this lesson by creating several diary entries told from the perspective of that animal.  Without divulging the animal, students who wanted could volunteer to read an entry or two aloud and see if classmates could guess which animal the point of view is coming from.

“Zebra” written by Gavin Ewart

White men in Africa,
Puffing at their pipes,
Think the zebra’s a white horse
With black stripes.

Black men in Africa,
With pipes of different types,
Know the zebra’s a black horse
With white stripes.

VERSE NOVEL




Lai, Thanhha.  Inside Out & Back Again.  New York: Harper Collins Children’s Books, 2011. ISBN: 978-0-06-196278-3

Poetic Elements:  This book is written in free verse and tells the story of a young girl and her family who leave Vietnam and start a new life in America.  Although the experiences spoken of in this book are unfamiliar to me, I was able to visualize myself in the vulnerable and unknown difficulties that the little girl, Kim Ha, personally experienced.  Sensory images were used throughout this story to allow readers like myself, to see even greater detail into what life in Vietnam was like, what it felt like leaving Vietnam and traveling on a boat, and then arriving to America and not knowing or understanding anything.  The distinctive language that Kim Ha uses to explain how other kids interacted with cruelty in America made me feel her pain and reminded me that I would never want to re-live those years of my life.   The language barriers that Kim Ha had were succinctly noticed as she 
spoke her thoughts in the English language.  Bits of humor trickle throughout the book when interpretations of the English language are not interpreted correctly by Kim Ha and her family, which reemphasizes to the reader how difficult it would be to leave your native country and put down roots in another country.   

Appeal:  This book would be perfect for a reader around the age of ten, which is how old Kim Ha was in the book.  Reader’s will not necessarily be able to relate to Kim Ha’s story as a familiar experience, but will find the story interesting being able to relate because of the similarity in age.   Readers will gain insight into the history of Vietnam, a greater understanding for people that look different from them, and hopefully have a greater compassion for others that relocate from near and afar. It’s never fun being the new kid on the block

Overall Quality:  The poems are definitely appropriate for late elementary students and on up to read.  The poems are capable of standing alone by themselves, but when read in order they tell the story of Kim Ha and her family coming to America.  Different character views are shared through the voice of Kim Ha who is telling this story first hand.  Each Free Verse poem is dated at the bottom and similarly resembles posts written in a journal.  The only illustration present in this book is on the cover.   After reading the book, you will realize that the cover is supposed to be a picture of the main character, Kim Ha, in Saigon underneath her beloved papaya tree that she had to leave behind to come to America.  I personally really enjoyed the ease in reading this book and gained a better perspective for people that are different from me.   

The Poets:  A single poet, Thanhha Lai, wrote this free verse book of poetry.  It is an anthology that tells the story of leaving the dangerous country of Vietnam and re-locating and finding safety in America.  Inside Out & Back Again is Lai’s first book to write and she won the 2011 National Book Award for Young People’s Literature for this book.  It is also a Newbery Honor Book.  Arriving in America on a boat in 1975 not knowing English and writing a book in English using Free Verse 38 years later that wins several national awards is quite an accomplishment!

Layout:  Inside Out & Back Again is a 260 page book told in four parts:  Saigon, At Sea, Alabama, and From Now OnSaigon shares what life was like living in the southern half of the country during strife.  At Sea describes the time of when Kim Ha and her family board a navy boat and travel for endless days wondering if they will actually make it to America.  Alabama shares of the family’s initial arrival and beginnings in America.  From Now On focuses on the realization that Kim Ha and her family know to be true, that father is missing in action from the war and will never be with them again.  The whole story occurs around 1975 and is historical fiction that relays much of what really happened to the author, Thanhha Lai, as she made the journey to leave Vietnam with her family and settle in America.  The book shares a note at the end written by the author revealing her intentions for writing this book of free Verse.

Spotlight Poem:  I would share the poem “Rainbow” as a way to introduce students to a lesson on racial tolerance.  I would also share more parts of the book Inside Out & Back Again so students would be able to place themselves in someone else’s shoes as they listened along.  Although not necessarily the most comfortable topic for teachers to discuss, acting “colorblind” around people that are created different and not acknowledging differences discounts their individuality.

“Rainbow” by Thanhha Lai

I face the class.
MiSSS SScott speaks.
Each classmate says something.

I don’t understand,
but I see.

Fire hair on skin dotted with spots.
Fuzzy dark hair on skin shiny as lacquer.
Hair the color of root on milky skin.
Lots of braids on milk chocolate.
White hair on a pink boy.
Honey hair with orange ribbons on see-through skin.
Hair with barrettes in all colors on bronze bread.

I’m the only
straight black hair
on olive skin.

POETIC FORM

Mecum, Ryan. Zombie Haiku.  Cincinnati:  How Books, 2008. ISBN  978-1-60061-070-7

Poetic Elements:  The topic at hand, Zombies, is what will keep the reader hooked over the use of any poetic elements used in this book.  Written concisely in the haiku format, each poem spits out a rhythmic image that builds upon the story one haiku at a time.  Zombie addicts will devour the implied humor.  The sense of taste is repeatedly emphasized as the characters in the book keep consuming their cravings of eating other humans.  Seeing, hearing, and feeling each description helps to draw the reader in further. The poet’s imaginative side is proven in his design and layout of the book. 

Appeal:  Typically the Japanese form of poetry known as haiku is not a popular pick with kids.  However this short, three lined poem with syllable necessities commands attention when the intriguing topic of Zombies is added.  Using inference skills to study the photos and pictures on each page should provide enough support in depicting the word choice meanings used in the poems.  The imagination of readers will run wild while reading this book. 

Overall Quality:  I believe the writing of this book is intended to entertain middle and high school aged students.  The targeted group will definitely embrace the book solely because of its topic, regardless of whether they are interested in poetry or specifically haiku.  The illustrations and visuals definitely compliment the story in this book.  As an adult with no interest in the subject, I would be concerned that the images and words written in the book might encourage an emotionally unstable person to act in an unlawful manner by doing something horrific. And then when the press releases a horrible story, society questions, “What would cause someone to do something like this?”  The book is well organized in that it tells a complete story.  The poems are all written in the same font and type size, but are randomly pasted on the pages.  The illustrations and photographs help add extra gore to the already written “gorey” text.  Reading about Zombies doesn’t interest me.  I do know for certain that I will never read another book by this author again because of the evil and atrocious ideas he is modeling to today’s youth. 

The Poets:  Ryan Mecum is the single poet that wrote this anthology collection about Zombies in haiku.  Mecum’s name would be more familiar to Zombie followers than it would be to the poetry world.   Zombie Haiku is his first book to be published.  He has written and published several other haiku books since on vampires, werewolves, and more about zombies. His official website for the book Zombie Haiku can be found at http://www.zombiehaiku.com/

Layout: Ryan Mecum, the author, begins with an introduction at the beginning of the book that explains the poetry form known as haiku.  He then shares that what is written inside, is his poetry journal which is what he has been writing while locked in the bathroom to keep from getting eaten from another Zombie.  The book is approximately 140 pages in length.  Two to four haiku poems are featured on each page, minus the random black and white Polaroid pictures featured on pages throughout.  Smeared and splattered blood and strands of human hair seem to adorn most pages.  The black and white Polaroid photos are of body parts that have been mutilated by a Zombie or of an actual Zombie photo.  Hand drawn pictures are also scattered throughout the book next to various haiku poems. The compilations of haiku are supposed to tell the story of how the main character became a Zombie, lived the Zombie experience, and was finished off as a Zombie.  The author mentions in the book’s conclusion that he would like the reader to pass a message onto his wife.  “Tell her I loved her and that I want to eat her and swallow her brains!”  The book really, really concludes with a picture of the author dressed and acting like a Zombie on the last page with a short biography.  The thoughts and emotions that can be construed from reading this book can go two ways; either you love the gore and delight with Zombies or you are terribly offended and disappointed in the filth that has been published.

Spotlight Poem:  I would use the two haiku poems written below as a story starter for a writing assignment in the month of October.  Students could practice using voice and descriptive writing.

Taken from Zombie Haiku, page 100

Two motionless boys
Stare as I try to stand up
In the dark hallway

The kids run from me
And dart outside through the door.
Not a good idea.